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Ebonii VS Skully - 1

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WHAHAHAHAHA!! SKULLY HAS RETURNED!

And, after finally finalizing her, she is officially a gremlin! Why a gremlin? One, you don't see many gremlin characters out there and goblins are so over used. Two, it fits more I feel with her mechanical habits. And three, it makes her special ability all the more making sense when I reveal it in the next page or two.

This is sort of a surprise for :iconwrenzephyr2: who has been showing off his character Ebonii and her special ability, to be able to manipulate the world around her, usually turning people into sexy chocolate skinned ladies like herself. But now she runs a foil of a gremlin! Not the most powerful of fairy folk but not to be underestimated ether! Who will win this fight? Only I (and a bit Wren sense I want him to have a say in it. XD ) know the answer! Stay tuned!

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Skully and Art © *Dragon-FangX
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:star::star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

A few things:
I renewed my Premium just so I could make the proper critique it deserves

For Vision:
As always your style is lovely and the stylization of it always makes me feel that the characters could easily be part of an animation. Furthermore, Ebonii is my favorite villain I've ever created and your style rendition does more than justice to her. All and all 5/5 stars

Originality:
I can honestly say I've never seen a style quite like yours. Whenever I catch it somewhere in my Deviantwatch list I always know when it is one of yours. Beyond the originality of style, the story is quite original. I can honestly say that I never envisioned Ebonii being confronted by a gremlin, I swear not once. This leads me to Skully. I love her design and word choice (I laughed way harder at "Choco-Lotta-Bimbo" than is socially acceptable in a College Union lounge).

Technique:
I have already stated your personal style's aesthetics being superb in Vision but I would like to mention the flow of the panels. I studied Scott McCloud's guides on working with comics and you are following all the rules of flow. Flow of Story, Flow of Dialogue, Flow of Time, everything. The reader's eyes are naturally guided through the panels making it feel as though they are watching a scene unfurl rather than seeing the panels individually on the page (an ability that is surprisingly hard to master)

Impact:
To say this was a surprise would be an understatement to end ALL understatements. I smiled and was blown away by the technique of it all. I love it, I love you, and I will be damned if I don't love Skully!

In summation, thank you for bringing this lovely work into the world and thank you further for letting me be a part of it.