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Mermaid Aquarium

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Mermaid Aquarium
16 Page Comic/Sequence - Female Shrinking and Transformation
Sera is invited to Mimir's house to see her brand new fish tank. But Mimir hasn't anything inside it... yet...


Art by *Dragon-FangX
Rest of Characters and Story by *Geistis
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

This comic is, on a technical level, perfectly solid and cohesive. There's no real complaints I can leverage there. Presentation, art, all of it, I believe, manages to get the intended product across just fine. The flaw, from my point of view, comes in the fact that I got exactly what was advertised and nothing more. In the end, it's basically just a transformation sequence, and there's really very little to pull me in or have it stick with me long term. Character interactions are short and to the point and there's no truly engaging twists or explorations of the resulting changed state. Thus, while I do not feel I didn't get what I was promised, I do feel somewhat... underwhelmed by the product.